Experience

I See

I Rise

I Learn

I Know Life

But if

I Know Life

I Break

I Fall

I Am…

Breathing.

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16 thoughts on “Experience

  1. ..and get up again…and …again… that’s how it works i guess…and we never stop learning…and thinking we know…and then fall again… nicely penned chris..

  2. “..but if/I know life/I break…” otoh, ignorance is far from bliss, either. A conundrum, and a well-executed piece all around, Chris.

  3. simplicity of this is stunning! much like life its in the simple where all the good things are and that is what I found in these words. Chris, I adore your writing and am so grateful to know your words. All my best my friend! ~ Rose

  4. We fall and we bounce back up again because life is there to lived.

    The structure suits the piece perfectly Chris, gives the reader space to pause and think. Good ink my friend.

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