you know what – i read this several times – and there’s a lot in this haiku that speaks to me…always afraid of falling but the shooting stars fall and it’s alright – not really though – our good luck sparkle show is their end…so better try to stay in my orbit..
The Waking Den 
love the image of shooting stars falling,
what a shining entry,
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Thanks for the support all year long of 2010…
Blessings.
A++
you know what – i read this several times – and there’s a lot in this haiku that speaks to me…always afraid of falling but the shooting stars fall and it’s alright – not really though – our good luck sparkle show is their end…so better try to stay in my orbit..
great posting for the season. mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/
beautiful imagery painted……………
um…I kind of wish I wrote this one chris!
simplicity brings out rich layers…
I dig your style friend!
Annie
I like it!
It is time to make a wish 🙂
Greetings!
Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!
End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
At this magical time of the year, we wish you all the BEST! U Rock!
“yet always: falling”
excellent imagination…
and a superb haiku 🙂