White are the grains
sprinkling life between us.
Red wraps the heartstrings
of the child’s morning cry.
Green sprout the seeds
of soul, nurtured in your light.
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Like the web you weaved made me think of holiday color indeed, guess I still have the spirit at my feed..haha
i like the colors you weave in here chris and i just love the child’s morning cry… beginnings…beginnings…beginnings..
colors, indeed, beautiful they are, with so much to represent
Life in colour – always good
Thats a colourful rendition! Nice!
the chain of life and the endless effort in nurturing that life… nice choice of colors
Three images of crystal clarity.
Lovely and most resonant, Chris. Three colors/senses of the time of year paint a mood, a moment.
colours and life – one and the same – the grains grow into heartstrings and seeds of soul – intriguing poem here – like little snapshots of concurrent happenings! nice!
I like this: “White are the grains sprinkling life between us”
what a colorful write! Happy (almost) new year to you, Chris.
nice…love the green and what it represents within that soul chris…nice walk through the colors man…hope you had a great holiday
I’m somewhat of a color-addict and love to discover the meanings and moods behind them. Color woven into poetry rings my bell! Hope all is going well with your book. I haven’t had a chance to read it yet, not to start pushing mine. Hopefully after next week when I get to Palm Desert and out of this snowless cold!
Beautiful and heartfelt, Chris. The first two lines are my favorite 🙂
Lovely my friend…. I could relate to it.
Thanks for Sharing. Wish you have a happy new year. May you have peace, love and prosperity.
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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I love this minimalist look at color from a new angle approach.
wow… such depth in so few little lines… really pulled me in
~L