Brown summer plains roil
It blooms in thundered breathing
Just a rasping—life.
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Brown summer plains roil
It blooms in thundered breathing
Just a rasping—life.
Good haiku, Chris.
plains that roil and air that rasps…I know this sort of day…feel it in the air…
really dig this one Chris…
Excellent haiku here.
Sounds a bit like my rasping hayfever. lol
“It blooms in thundered breathing”
i love that line! great haiku, Chris.
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this is a rasp for life kind of a poem – beautiful
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