18 thoughts on “Melodious Treason

  1. hi chris…

    i especially like the way the words melodious treason play off of one another…and i am glad it was too late to break your heart…i enjoyed the careful wording, and simplicity, yet they ignite my imagination and leave it to me to roam the halls of where you allow the me to roam…wonderful poetry…

  2. Very powerful, echos of true suffering. It is quite challenging to evoke that much emotion in such limited space, you met and exceeded it. Wonderfully done ~ Rose

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