I liked this alot. In the infinite sea of life…a small, smile producing memory of times past. See, it took me more words and I expressed myself far less eloquently than your poem…that’s the beauty of it. Good job. Vb
What a fantastic statement inside a diddy haiku.
It really isn’t worth looking back with regret, besides those two ships clearly cant sail together a simple storm would destroy them both
I liked this alot. In the infinite sea of life…a small, smile producing memory of times past. See, it took me more words and I expressed myself far less eloquently than your poem…that’s the beauty of it. Good job. Vb
The sea stretches on…life goes on…nice!
Nicely done, Kris. In case you’re tracking, I poped over from Twitter.
What a fantastic statement inside a diddy haiku.
It really isn’t worth looking back with regret, besides those two ships clearly cant sail together a simple storm would destroy them both
a sense of vastness, longing and sadness..