Keeping to a “short but sweet” theme that seems to be overarching my poetry this week, I give you a Haiku. Enjoy:
Never seen Mountains;
the inner is higher than
without: nothing known.
And by the by, as a part of that, I nominate Kavita! Read any of her stuff. You’ll quickly figure out why.
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short and sweet,
you said it yourself…
lovely entry,
Thanks for the award acceptance and nomination!
Happy Rally.
lovely
now i understand what haiku is..
i should try too π
A thought provoking wonderful haiku.
Anita.
http://anitaspoetry.blogspot.com/2010/12/yet-to-be.html
thought provoking indeed and i’m not sure if i really get it…read it several times and still…
perfect ku my friend. you have this mastered! nicely done!
I’m not sure I got the right meaning here, not knowing sometimes makes you with better inner? Feeling high as the mountains you’ve never seen? but I like the ending … made me read it over and over to figure it out π Nothing is known if I’m right or wrong .. still the mountains look beautiful.
I love Haikus, nice job!
Deeply thought…
Love it π
Sumit Sarkar
http://myriad-sumit.blogspot.com/
A very strong one…
I love it π
short yet strong.
sweet yet bitter.
ah you haven’t sth new yet …. yesterday i read your haiku without knowing it has to be 5 – 7 – 5 syllables – now after writing my first haiku, i look at it with the eyes of a specialist…LOL
you’re great chris!!
Haha, ah yes, now you too can be a Haiku specialist! They’re always fun to play around with – thanks for the compliment Claudia. I know I’ve not got anything new yet. Busy day about here. I’ll probably have something up tomorrow though!
Very beautiful imagination..
Take a look on my poetry..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/11/25/depths-of-my-heart
As always…you hit the mark with what you write.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/12/03/eyes-in-a-room/
Congratulations on a lovely poem and a deserved award, Chris.
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