I watch them ride
memories of my failures–
wonder if I tried
or all were vaunted blunders.
–
Too long I’ve been afield,
at war with thought, the world–
from this madness I have tried to shield
and so into the madness, they’ve unfurled.
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interesting thoughts…watch them ride..from a kind of being passive it turns into getting active
i like that switch..that process
oh the sins of the father…
poignant
Deep words expressing deeper feelings and thoughts.. well composed..!!
I wanted to say, thank you so very much for your previous participation at Jingle Poetry potluck.
Your entry adds light and love to our community; we would love to have you this coming Monday,
Any poem is welcome.
Keep shining,
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xoxox
very true words. our suppressed self will sooner or later rebel and break free, so we should better not chain him down.
beautifully written.