These hands are not my hands,
How could they be
Baby blue, holding you
Swaddled, unmoved—
The wind was yours to claim,
I saw it, this past
Flowing reality of moments undone,
Webbing through existence see
You run, you sing
Let the ground give
Let the earth quake
And all rejoice, your howl
Resonant rebound through vibrant fields
Life, how I saw thee fly—
Impossible to reconcile
This motionless reality
To the beauty of my memory:
Where do you sleep?
splendid piece.
visiting you from JIngle’s TRP – thursday rally for poets.
divine….beautiful insights…
love all…
..the wind was yours to claim…what a beautiful and thougthful piece chris
I like the expression of yearning your poem brings to mind.
You deal with death so lovingly here. It is cast in beauty
Nice Chris
Best on those studies
and welcome!!!
Moonie hugs
This gave me chills.
Brilliant and beautiful! Really like that feeling of yearning this poem brings.
This is a really cool poem.
it has a really good flow to it.
Rolls easy of the tongue when i read it out loud
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Thanks for the support.
Happy Tuesday!