Destiny
Quite the rest for me
Put far from mine own hand
A tourist in a foreign land.
Fate
May invoke a wait;
Still, not quite the range
Or any real sense of change.
Independence
Quite the instance;
Do what you will
Any need fulfill.
Freedom
Is quite random
But worry, worry
Leaves the future quite so blurry.
Decisions, decisions.
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What a tremendous poem!
haha!!! This was awesome!!
The conclusion was too good!! Decisions decisions… 🙂
Fantastic use of rhymes, Chris… Really, very very impressive, this piece! And you picked 4 of the best topics ever!
Bravo!!!
This is really impressive.
I like the way you emphasised ‘fate’ as a one letter word.
Great job
lovely done!
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