Beneath the Waves

Photo by Chris Galford

White water rush,

cool crystal commence

the crashing of my flesh

subverted in the waves

of vigorous caress,

still on, this mountain roar–

a silent stillness, in the drink.

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6 thoughts on “Beneath the Waves

  1. The use of opposites was very clever and stunning!!!
    “still on, this mountain roar–
    a silent stillness, in the drink.” — wow!!! Just presented a perfect picture of absolute beauty!

    A lovely refreshing piece, Chris…

    • What better a system of contrasts than nature itself? At one moment peaceful, the next set to raging…a day can go from shining blue to raging torrents in mere moments.

      Glad you liked, Kavita! I look forward to seeing your One Shot this week. I’m sure it will be stunning, as all your stuff does tend to be 😉

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